no bit mapped? well, OK. further refinement is necessary. the weight of the new typeface...used for "text" is too light compared to "me." the size of the logo is too large on the card. you may have made it large to compensate for the lightness of "text?" suggest you use trade or news gothic or univers instead. if you must use the super light "text" font (because you like it?), i suggest using it for your linking phrase/tag line. also suggest changing from the oblique to roman. stationery/forms need to include other contact information/addresses.
i meant to say further refinement is necessary to save the design from the brink of averageness.
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